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Her eyes glisten in fascination.
Studying those lights.
Cool glitters against the auburn sky.

Take me to the sky.

"Hold tight." He says.
She grips the chains.


Hold tight.


She nods.
"Okay."

His strong arms give one hefty push...
And the force sweeps her up.

The wind starts to tickle.
And it makes her laugh.

She sees her pink shoes touch the tips of the lights.
And for a moment, the breath is gone.


... She flies.


But the rusted bars creak.
And the swing snatches low.

The backs of her shoes scrape grass...

She lowers her head and sees
Her legs are too long.

... I want to walk on the sky forever.


"It's all you now." He calls.
His fingers leave her back.

It's only you now.
You're on your own.

One last push- she thinks to say.

I want to see the sky.

"Daddy... I'll hold tight." She firmly insists.

But he only shakes his head.
And suddenly the lights are gone.

She looks down and notices the dry grass on the ground.

"No." He finally says.

"Let go."

The sky is gone, honey.

Now,
Let go.
©2007-2009 ~PropertyoftheUchiha
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Author's Comments

.... My dad wants me to grow up.

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:iconrunwithskizzers:
one) that was beautiful. the shortness of each line, and the cuts of dialogue and thought - makes for this (ironically) visceral image in my head.

two) growing up is not necessary. you can become more responsible, but it doesn't mean you have grow up - hell, the line between grown up/not grown up has become so blurred, who can even tell anymore? the sky's not gone - walk in the stars - dream all day. we can't get boggled down by reality and our feet don't belong stuck to the ground for the rest of our lives.

fly, little girl :D

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Man, I can't draw. I'm only here because I have this crazy, unhealthy obsession with all things SasuSaku.

I do have words though. And those words are prett-y decent.
:iconxairylle:
Omg................. I don't know what to say...

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You laugh at me because I'm different but I laugh at you...... BECAUSE YOU'RE ALL THE SAME!!

Yeah, it's just that... I DARE.
:iconpropertyoftheuchiha:
^_^ that says enuf. saikyuu.

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:iconpropertyoftheuchiha:
Preeti...

i l0ve you. :tears:

thank you for that. :cuddle:
thank you.
*showers you with fat-avenger plushies*
^_^

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:iconrunwithskizzers:
<3 bebé - crap, i forgot to favorite it. i'm sooo on it!

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Man, I can't draw. I'm only here because I have this crazy, unhealthy obsession with all things SasuSaku.

I do have words though. And those words are prett-y decent.
:iconbundyangel15:
That was beautiful anj-chan.

My dad wants me to grow up as well. -tears-

lovely! -glomps- children for lyfe!

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:iconbellasfireflies:
Aww, that's such a cute story!!!! Don't ever grow up Anj, I know I'm not gonna!! :giggle: Very nice story, you're quite the writer, huh?? :clap:

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:icondunpinta:
aww anj :tears: Thats so heartmoving. .

Wow, You have me absolutely speechless. :hug:
:iconpropertyoftheuchiha:
:tears: im not ready.. I hate it.
>_<
*huggles you*
saikyuu jen-chan. ^_^

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:iconpropertyoftheuchiha:
cute!?! *whacks you over your soul-lizz head.*
:shakefish:
aint cute ye00!! tis sposed to be a tragedy. tsha.
:stab:

:laughing: but saikyuu yeah, i write too. (only i dont really like it that much. Makes me think too much.) :giggle:

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