Taken from Chapter 21: Presence of Water (Weeks Before He Left)
"The wind twisted at their hair, toyed and mingled with the strands of baby pink and blue-black, nipped at the heat of their bodies, danced around the light material of their clothes binding them together.
And the vast skies wept, taken by the beauty.
Sasuke stood there looking at her, at the places his mouth kissed. The smooth paleness of skin, the softness of her cheeks, the fine curve of her nose
One droplet of rain, a shattered wet streak across the delicate bridge of it, but the girl seemed not to notice.
It was only the dim circles of light in Sasukes eyes. Something she no longer saw, but instead, felt.
Then more rain came, a drizzle of beads hitting gently at their faces, soaking into their hair and dampening the hues of their clothes.
Sasuke-kun she said, losing the honorific to the drift of the rain.
He said nothing but kissed her. Just so she knew he had heard beyond the downpour.
Nothing now but thoughts dug themselves deeper and deeper into his mind, repeating many times over.
That he never wanted to be alone again.
That he lost everything once and he never wanted to lose again.
That with his past holding him back, he was only hiding.
But that she would find him.
I want you to find me."
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This deviation is dedicated to my 23 year old Austrian friend Julie.
Edit: Gah!!! Julie is 21. So sorry, na. *blushes* -
who was so nice to offer to translate my fanfic into german so she can share it with her fellow-country peoples... and Narutards. (...Haha! Yes "narutards" ...)
Julie... "danke schön!" And don't do so many things, you might just kill yourself before you get to even see our Sasuke-kun come back. *laughs*
I definitely get the emotion behind this and your digital coloring is very nice (a bit to be desired).
The colors should maybe be a bit darker considering the fact that its raining? Also, Sakura's eye is a bit far back on her head in comparison to Sasuke's. Otherwise, very nice. :]
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When I walk by, you turn to look, because I'm so familiar. But when you ask me who I am, I'll simply say.
wow... an actual actual critics comment. thank you so much!!! I'm happy someone's pointed something wrong. Yes, I tend to do that to all my eyes. haha a bit misplaced and all.
Also the darker shading... i was aware of that... but I have a fear of changing too much and having my work look completely different in a worse way. Im still trying to feel my way around the shading bit... thank you so much for the meaningful comment.
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"I Am Addicted to This Perceived Fate." - Dir en Grey "Kodou"
Soon-to-be a "Narutard." [link]
Anj. where in the world do you find time...lol...procrastinator...ha ha I love the pic...I can't critic on it since I can never work photoshop or anything else thats awesome like that...*cires* But I read that chapter good chapter....or was that lure me...I dont remember...Don't hurt me..lol..But thats all I got...I will post my sketches up...someday...
har har... you just answered your own question. I'm a crammer, its my JOB to do every insignificant thing before my actual priority. lol! ... thanks thanks and even if you don't work on photoshop, you can still comment.
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"I Am Addicted to This Perceived Fate." - Dir en Grey "Kodou"
Soon-to-be a "Narutard." [link]
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The colors should maybe be a bit darker considering the fact that its raining? Also, Sakura's eye is a bit far back on her head in comparison to Sasuke's. Otherwise, very nice. :]
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When I walk by, you turn to look, because I'm so familiar. But when you ask me who I am, I'll simply say.
I'm just a passing friend...
Also the darker shading... i was aware of that... but I have a fear of changing too much and having my work look completely different in a worse way. Im still trying to feel my way around the shading bit... thank you so much for the meaningful comment.
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"I Am Addicted to This Perceived Fate." - Dir en Grey "Kodou"
Soon-to-be a "Narutard."
[link]
Love ya*hugs*
-Aly
Sakura's hair looks so beautiful. It's almost sparkiling! 0__0 It just looks gorgous. I <3 it.
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Gabe Saporta.<3
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"I Am Addicted to This Perceived Fate." - Dir en Grey "Kodou"
Soon-to-be a "Narutard."
[link]
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"I Am Addicted to This Perceived Fate." - Dir en Grey "Kodou"
Soon-to-be a "Narutard."
[link]
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"I Am Addicted to This Perceived Fate." - Dir en Grey "Kodou"
Soon-to-be a "Narutard."
[link]
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"I Am Addicted to This Perceived Fate." - Dir en Grey "Kodou"
Soon-to-be a "Narutard."
[link]
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